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If it wasnt for the title of this cartoon and the fact that I love fruity pebbles lol.. I probably wouldnt have watched this. However it was very basic and does have a lot of flaws with it, but its okay because its all part of the beginning animators learning experience! We all start out somewhere, so im just going to give you some simple yet inspiring words of enlightenment. Keep doing what you love the most and always make an effort to learn and level up your skills. The key is to never give up and to just believe in what you enjoy doing because in all reality... thats what life is really all about. Follow you dreams and enjoy the ride my friend! Hope this was helpful. You can visit my production page for all my latest content and updates here.. Everyone is welcome!-

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Excellent job! This is a brilliant animation that delivers such a simple, yet powerful message! Overall quality of the animation is very well done. Just keep practicing and doing what you love and youll find that your dreams will start falling into place sooner then you thought it would. Just as this animation presented, "work Smarter, not harder". Thats the truth and it will always make things easier to accomplish! Just have fun with what you love doing and learn as you go! Keep up the good work my friend! Visit my production page on facebook if you would like! Everyone is welcome!! -

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This wasnt too bad, just need to work on leveling up your skills so that you can boost your overall views and make the production quality of your videos better. Just practice drawing and finding what kind of style you are looking to achieve and you will be well on your way to creating some awesome content. If this is what you enjoy doing then just keep practicing, believe in yourself, and most important never give up! Hope this helped. Visit my facebook page to to give a like and stay up to date with all of our latest content! -

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Jayrockx92k9 responds:

Thanks, this actually one my first few animations and thanks for the pointers. I will keep practicing and hopefully the next one will be better.

This was very brief and the animation was very standard. However i do like the art style of this piece... you seem to have a good understanding of drawing. My advice is that you should work on enhancing the audio quality of your animations and learn how to give your cartoons more fluidity. This will not only boost the amount of views for your videos, but it will also help you to understand and learn how to create better and more entertaining content. If making cartoons is something you really enjoy, then make every effort to learn and achieve a higher level of skill! Keep up the good work

I rate it 4 stars in a sense that it delivered a decent animation with a peaceful story line that would seem suitable for kids. I cant say much else about it for now other than what most of everyone else already said, but I will say this... if animation is your passion then by all means keep making them! You did a good job and I wish you luck

SuperWoof responds:

super thank you ^_^ there's still a fair amount of people who never grow up though :3

This is trippy lol. Nice work

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